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It took days to hollow out the soft parts
of the trunk, dig out the tree-flesh and sap,
polish the raw wood so that when he sat,
there would be no splinters. He carved his name
into the side, like a blessing, a declaration
of good fortune, and stowed his forest inside.
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i don't know what this is

it may be part of a larger whole

or maybe it is just a small whole thing
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~ClioStorm creates a beautiful image with simple language in tree, fiddler crab. ( Suggested by *0hgravity and Featured by ^neurotype )
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~gummyrabbit Dec 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like your description in the artist's comment part.
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~ClioStorm Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
haha thank you :D :heart:
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~anapests-and-ink Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I keep coming back to this, trying to find the right words to say, but I'm still speechless.
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Mood: Love ~pakuuna Dec 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is a beautiful poem, truly breathtaking! And the title sounds like a line from the TV show Supernatural:)
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~ClioStorm Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
Oh gosh, I was hoping no-one would notice... Yeah, I stole the title straight out of Supernatural. It was supposed to be a place-holder but then it just kind of stuck... I think it suits the poem, though. Thank you! :heart:
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~MickeyFebruary Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
As part of a whole or a whole itself, I think it is great either way. The imagery and feeling this small poem transfers is beautiful.
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~ClioStorm Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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~Karinta Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
It seems like a small whole thing to me. A flawless thing.
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~ClioStorm Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: thank you
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~Karinta Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Aw, you're welcome.
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