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i cannot remember what is good anymore,
because have you seen how light
can obscure a face?
and i hear her within me,
a slow creeping, from fingertip
to earlobe. the sun shatters.

later, i am lying with my cheek
against the floor. there seems to be
a simplicity to this unravelling.
i press my lips against the wood
and smooth my hands across it. the moon
glances in through the window and
moves on, her eyes downcast. i remain here
alone.

and this is why we ache for tragedy -
because it reminds us that every beginning
has an end, and because it splits us open
so everything can see the heart of us.

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=sunshinegypsy Jan 17, 2012  Professional Writer
"and because it splits us open
so everything can see the heart of us."

This is just the perfect ending. Don't change this.
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~ClioStorm Jan 20, 2012  Student Writer
:heart: thank you, I'm really glad you like it =]
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`FuzzyHoser Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gosh, I've never looked at tragedy in such a way.
But I think you're on to something.
This is so beautiful.. :heart:
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~ClioStorm Jan 20, 2012  Student Writer
I'm supposed to write an essay on tragedy... I'd be so much happier writing a poem instead :XD: thank you, I'm really glad you like it =] :heart:
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`FuzzyHoser Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes...I find poetry all the more easy, also.
Just expand your idea, yeah?
And you're welcome! :heart:
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:icontearoses:
Wow, this is gorgeous. The images and emotions seem so real.
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~ClioStorm Jan 18, 2012  Student Writer
:heart: thank you =]
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:iconunspecifiedunknown:
i love the imagery behind

"later, i am lying with my cheek
against the floor. there seems to be
a simplicity to this unravelling.
i press my lips against the wood
and smooth my hands across it. the moon
glances in through the window and
moves on, her eyes downcast. i remain here
alone."


oh too many times.
beautiful piece, as usual, darlin'
:rose:
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~ClioStorm Jan 18, 2012  Student Writer
:heart: thank you, love
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